PoyzenJam's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Orion(ChaoticDezine)]

so...

its like the same 2 notes for basically the whole song
got on my nerves
the synths that sound like motorcycles should be changed
at 4:00 ???? uhmm.. all uf a sudden everything comes back again. there isnt even a build to it or anything. i was really suprised.
the pads arent great for techno either

[(E7)EmCee Cthulhu]

good choice of song

you should get a better mic ...
sounds like your trying to rap over a PA system
the volume levels are all off too

GloineFiodh responds:

workin on it

[Macrocosm ~The Sky's Lament~]

hey man

this is really cool
the thunder and all reminds me of my song mournful dreams
good job, i like it
some good ambient here
-Fayde

[HW - Clubbing]

wow

whoever made the piano part must have a small chode and must be extremely ugly
oh wait... thats charlie
yo this is gay

haywirehaywire responds:

i love your review its so helpfull i will now mark if helpfull

[**!Scratch My Hate For You!**]

... sup

pleez make full version...
scratches are ill

[GSG - EmptyStreet OilyPud]

whadup

i really like the beat, very chil. the repeating crashes seem to be a bit loud. the vocals are a great touch to this piece, good job there... i like the whole progression too, although im a bit iffy on the 1 minute intro. strings are raw
Fayde

GunstarGreene responds:

Thanks for the review.

[Rainy Daze (sampled)]

the guitar is cool

would be a lot better with a better beat
and a louder one, more prominent
right now it just kinda sounds like sporadic noises
a beat that flowed smoother and doesnt sound so choppy should do the trick

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

Well I ended up playin wit tha song and fucked it all up, lmao. Thanx for the review, I eventually just erased this from my hard drive cuz after a while it just sounds like hell to me, lol. I think i'ma take about an hour each day and practice my drum compostitions.

[Absolute Lack of Enthusiasm]

hey

the beat is cool
but there is just way too much going on in the song
try to keep it more simple

Methreee responds:

haha for sure. thanks for checkin

[Underground ABCs]

cool

this beat needs another higher melody on it.
tht would make it so much better
the vocals in the begginning and at the end need to be turned up a tad
good job dude
a longer version would be nice too
with more change ups and such, like the one at 55, where the main melody is taken out
Fayde

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

this is a beat by shaggyhaired, I got up this morning and was diggin on it after finishin my concept. More of an exebition of the concept of rapping that is explained in the main comment. thanks for the review.

[Shogun Braker!!!!]

dang

really tight
more drum change ups would be nice
more ambient noises/effects
pretty awesome though

Druids-Warcry responds:

its my demo, im finished it soon, but your input is wonderful for the final product