PoyzenJam's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[War Time Mophuka]

haha

i might download this to listen to as a joke

its really funny...

"steppin up my game cuz im rappin" - what a great line..... SYKE.

[I Told Another Lie...]

LOL

this is what i call emo hip hop

haterrrrr

kanvas responds:

EXACTLY WHAT YOUR MISSING MY MAN EMOTION......THANX MAN.....

[Depth of it All]

okay

you got the idea with the beat
the beginning pads and the notes in the beginning dont sound like they belong in a hip hop song though
the strings that come in after that also sound a bit fake/cheesy. are they a preset or somthing?
the strings at 1:27 though are a little better, its a cool melody too
but yeah those computer noise sounding notes dont really sound that great for hip hop
some drum change ups would also be nice as well
your on the right path though, you have alot of different noises and sounds so it doesnt get too repetitive
keep it up
Fayde

[The Verity of Novel Air]

hey

dude
i REALLY like the paino in the beginning
sounds real tight
however, i dont like how you dropped the beat at 1:04 into something completely different. i would add the strings from the beginning after the beat
the piano in the beginning could be a little more quiet, you can barely hear the strings
i like the progression though after the beat
and how the main melody of the piano eventually comes back in
you could also make the beat a tad louder, and add change ups to it
i could help you more if this was intended for a certain genre

i dont understand why its rated so low though
people should listen to the progression more
good piece
Fayde

[Pressure's On]

hey

the beat would be better if you first of all added hi hats
second, it could be better sounding if you turned it up, the beat is really hard to hear over the loud melody
the melody kinda sounsd like somthin id hear in a mario game when im underground after goin through some pipes
its aight tho
youll get it, just keep at it
Fayde

[(E7)Rap Experiments]

well

some more intensity would be nice
it sounds like your just talking
good beat choice to rap over
but you should credit gangstarr in your author comments
i mean, i like chill rapping
but this is almost boring
act like your into it
keep at it
Fayde

GloineFiodh responds:

be more specific theres 3 verses.

[It was all a Dream!]

so..

there are alot of gun noises in this song... it gets really abnoxious
there isnt much of a melody, just background notes
i didnt notice any drum change ups
or any change ups for that matter

janiev responds:

I know there isn't much of a melody and thats what i do wanted.. It is a rap beat without the rap..
And i can change the drums a little.. And i can look at the gun sounds..

[Hokkaido]

pretty chill

the mastering needs some work
the hi hats seem like they are almost the loudest thing in the song, overpowering the rest
some more bass in the bess drum would be nice too
otherwise this is pretty chill, relaxing
Fayde

[FF | Chipotle Theory]

hmm

heya freddy
damn this is jazzy
i didnt like the clap at first, but then it got to 51 seconds, and it fits really well in that melody
i like how you add wahs to your songs
is that a reason thing, sampled like that, or is it some frequency setting i dont know about?
i like it dude this is a jam
Fayde

freddyfinger responds:

thanks, yeah i adjusted the filter frequency & resolution to give it that wah sound

[Feel the (lonely) Beat]

okay

there arent any drums...
sounds like you are using FL presets too, cant tell for sure

ccc75 responds:

I made this in GarageBand. (No FL effects)