PoyzenJam's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Victory and Defeat]

hey

i think you got off to a bit of a slow start but once the song progressed your flow was solid
the singing was funny, it made me laugh
i dont like how you sped up the rapping tho, after singing, and then you were rapping quiter.
i say either rap 2x as fast as the tempo for the whole song, or AT the tempo for the whole song, prolly not both
i think like 25 sec to the first singing was the best rapping for sure, your flow got really good there
on the line "whats the definition of a sin" and after you really got into the spirit
but overall good job dude
i understand this is a hard piece to rap over
i hope you rap over more of me and haywyres stuff in the future
thank you!
Fayde

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

I sang just for you, lol. Honestly, I sang because you ragged my singin B4 so I figured I try to make it sound like sum cheezy 50's singer =) The transition was necessary because I wanted to have 2 full verses, and also thought it would be a fun challenge to write with 2 tempo's. All good and fun, I'll definetly be on em, thanks for the review

[A Tribute 2 The Tribute]

damn

dude...
this is raw
your gettin good

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

Ah yes thank you sir

[Feels Like Meh (NG Cut)]

.....

can you like... give me lessons
ill be your apprentice

[(KKK)LondonNegrosGettinKrunk]

god

stop
no one thinks this is funny

krunkkillazkrew responds:

N***A............

[(KKK) Twinko Lil' Gay Star]

wtf...

you guys ruin hip hop

krunkkillazkrew responds:

Yo MoTHer Iz mA hOE

[FF | The Phuket Quartet]

hello again and f*ck you

*facepalm*
can i just like...
watch you make a song
i would learn alot (except prolly not cuz you use reason)
i dont even wanna collab or anything
im not worthy
im actually bowing as im typing this
lol jk
but seriously ...

the guitar is sick
i dont really like the pads tho at 0:37 - they are ok, but i know you can do better
vocals once again are on point
same with sax
those wah - souding things are kinda cool, also kinda loud
i really like how you picked a more messy snare for this one, as opposed to what you usually choose as a crisp clack
diggin those tambourines

not one of your best
(so its only incredible, not godly)

Fayde

freddyfinger responds:

lol thanks man, your latest song open mind is really fuckin nice

[HW - Prototype (VG)]

oh i see...

i know exactly whats wrong with this

it would be good

if it wasnt so bad

(helpful review)

-Fayde

haywirehaywire responds:

wow.

[HW - Mountain Top]

hey bitch

this sucks
jk
but seriously
jus playin tho
but for real
jokingly,
but really....

your gay

ok but seriously
i have feedback

jk

no but i do.
at 1:39, you make it travel from one ear to the next really fast
make it more gradual, it actually was unpleasant when it jumped fast like that

also another suggestion

you should not be so homosexual

jk

but seriously

this isnt your best
but its tight
add scratches

that would put the icing on the cake

i feel like i forgot something...

OH

You enjoy men penetrating your asshole.

ps.
this sucks

10/10
5/5

(Helpful review)

-Fayde

haywirehaywire responds:

wow im surprised your not banned from reviewing yet

[Fancy Mike - Fistful of Feet]

uhh

it was on a good path till like 32 seconds
then it was like meh
thought you shoulda changed it up more but w/e
nice job overall

[Monk - Poetry In Neutral]

what up

dope
got this shit on my ipoddd
im really diggin the bell on the 2nd snare
good shit

-Fayde

MC-Q responds:

Fayde.! Its monk from the vent.! Haha. but thanks