PoyzenJam's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Victory and Defeat]

hey

i think you got off to a bit of a slow start but once the song progressed your flow was solid
the singing was funny, it made me laugh
i dont like how you sped up the rapping tho, after singing, and then you were rapping quiter.
i say either rap 2x as fast as the tempo for the whole song, or AT the tempo for the whole song, prolly not both
i think like 25 sec to the first singing was the best rapping for sure, your flow got really good there
on the line "whats the definition of a sin" and after you really got into the spirit
but overall good job dude
i understand this is a hard piece to rap over
i hope you rap over more of me and haywyres stuff in the future
thank you!
Fayde

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

I sang just for you, lol. Honestly, I sang because you ragged my singin B4 so I figured I try to make it sound like sum cheezy 50's singer =) The transition was necessary because I wanted to have 2 full verses, and also thought it would be a fun challenge to write with 2 tempo's. All good and fun, I'll definetly be on em, thanks for the review

[A Tribute 2 The Tribute]

damn

dude...
this is raw
your gettin good

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

Ah yes thank you sir

[Feels Like Meh (NG Cut)]

.....

can you like... give me lessons
ill be your apprentice

[(KKK)LondonNegrosGettinKrunk]

god

stop
no one thinks this is funny

krunkkillazkrew responds:

N***A............

[(KKK) Twinko Lil' Gay Star]

wtf...

you guys ruin hip hop

krunkkillazkrew responds:

Yo MoTHer Iz mA hOE

[FF | The Phuket Quartet]

hello again and f*ck you

*facepalm*
can i just like...
watch you make a song
i would learn alot (except prolly not cuz you use reason)
i dont even wanna collab or anything
im not worthy
im actually bowing as im typing this
lol jk
but seriously ...

the guitar is sick
i dont really like the pads tho at 0:37 - they are ok, but i know you can do better
vocals once again are on point
same with sax
those wah - souding things are kinda cool, also kinda loud
i really like how you picked a more messy snare for this one, as opposed to what you usually choose as a crisp clack
diggin those tambourines

not one of your best
(so its only incredible, not godly)

Fayde

freddyfinger responds:

lol thanks man, your latest song open mind is really fuckin nice

[HW - Prototype (VG)]

oh i see...

i know exactly whats wrong with this

it would be good

if it wasnt so bad

(helpful review)

-Fayde

haywirehaywire responds:

wow.

[Fancy Mike - Fistful of Feet]

uhh

it was on a good path till like 32 seconds
then it was like meh
thought you shoulda changed it up more but w/e
nice job overall

[Monk - Poetry In Neutral]

what up

dope
got this shit on my ipoddd
im really diggin the bell on the 2nd snare
good shit

-Fayde

MC-Q responds:

Fayde.! Its monk from the vent.! Haha. but thanks