damn
those drums are raw as hell
good job with the samples as well
damn
those drums are raw as hell
good job with the samples as well
Thanks a lot brotha
uhhhh
gay
you
ooooooz an ahhhhzzz
makes me wanna sleep
very relaxing
really great to just zone out to
i can picture this in the background of a video game while exploring (oblivion)
im right
what did i tell you?
i told you about the paino and you didnt believe me
and everyone agrees.
you gotta believe me more lol
your not always right martaardddd
u poopface
i wanted it this way
yo..
sick
your flows ill on this one dude
thanks for rappin over our beat
i really like the first line, it packs a punch and fits really well
really good job
-Fayde
Yeah man, good job on the beat, subtle and emotional good for storytelling. Glad you liked it.
sup man
pretty tight
i see what your going for with this one
your lyrics are pretty good, although i would suggest that the flow could use a lil bit of work, there are some minor pauses, and some lines seems a little streatched
you got potential so just keep workin on gettin your flow smoother.
good job dude
-Fayde (PJ)
Yeah man...working on that flow...tough to get that shit just right without taking a lot of time. Glad you liked it though and thanks for the review.
not bad
i dont really want to be your friend but
the samples kinda tight
there are way too many vocals in my opinion
the beat should be louder, or just turn down vocals
there also isnt an ending, it just abruptly stops
and just so you know, im voting on this now for the first time, so how do you think it got to 1.2 before i even looked at it?
so obviously your wrong when you PM complaining that im the reason for peoples low scores lol....
by the way i gave this a 4/5
-Fayde
............
so...
are we at the carnival?
cuz this is like the music id hear.
and my NG name is PoyzenJam not JamPoyzen... therefore its PJ not JP... redo the track. lol...
otherwise i suppose your raps are decent, but the chorus is lame
and why are you trying to battle people that dont even rap?
i must have gotten under your skin that you had to make a fuckin song about me, my boy haywyre and omega phantom....
im favoriting this though, it made me laugh, i wanna listen to this later
-Fayde
RIGHTEOUS MAN! AT LEAST YOUR HONEST.
ello charles
the snare sounds hollow
put some meat behind that shittt
martard was saying i use the same drum seet so i think i put some phaser or something really wierd on it
LOL
hopefully this is a joke song
because im LOLing the whole way through
Fayde
yeah dude..... LOLING!!! YOU FUCKIN DORK
Check out more of my music on my sites:] -Fayde
Age 32, Male
Milwaukee, WI
Joined on 5/31/09