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WOW!

i agree, better than anything gaywire has made

cjhgb4 responds:

much love but dont talk about my homie like that pussyjam

not bad

firstly, the snare needs to be replaced. it sounds like a fruity loops preset. with this song i would go with a clap, not a marching band sounding snare. the bass drum is also really weak. i think the beat should also have some more variety and should be changed up more throughout the song. i counted 0 drum breaks and change ups during the song.
for that matter, the song doesnt change at all in this 2:15. there is no intro or outro. its basically one long loop.
if you wanted it to be like that, you might as well make it shorter and label it as a loop.
also the percs are pretty quiet. and the vocals are really loud.
where is this sampled from? i swear ive heard this melody many times before.
maybe in a commercial or a skate video.
anyways keep it up
-Fayde

JoeyKeys responds:

Quick freestyle beat, so almost everything you said is irrelevant. No drum break or change is is for a reason. There doesn't have to be an intro or outro, it is suppose to be like a loop.
And as for the snare, its sampled from vinyl, and not fl preset, and any the clap or snare is opinionated.

so basically

whoever found this sample must be awesome

haywirehaywire responds:

maybe in that persons dreams

0 out of 10, orgin

inspired by me

u regen

haywirehaywire responds:

what

your on the right path...

if really mainstream is what your going for...
this track is really simple and basic, but nonetheless not too bad for your age.
the gun noises are pretty corny in my opinion, and only continue to give off the bad reputation that hip hop has right now, all angry gangsters and guns and murder
but keep at it yo. and i dont know why you want to kill someone for starting shit on NG. but thats none of my business... also, you said, "fuck everyones opinions"... you should take some opinions into consideration at least. thats how you get better.
keep at it
-Fayde

CKC2009 responds:

na my music is jus the emotion im feelin at dat moment in song..

and the reason "fuck everybodys opinion" is cos i make the music the way it is

because i wanted to...id only take in opinions on mastering etc..

hdgsfsg

the reason why i wanna spoon with u

freddyfinger responds:

lollllllllllllllllllllllll

needs more variety

it needs more of a melody, other than just the 2 notes playing throughout the song...
the drums could be louder and more prominent too

LuigiSounds responds:

Yes, i am very aware of that.
This beat was just made for rhyming on, so i decided to keep it pretty simple and monotone :)
Thanks for the 7 though.

WOW

YOU GUYS are insane!!!!
HOW DO YOU JAM LIKE THISSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????
please teach me

krunkkillazkrew responds:

i KNO WEE IZ

WTF

HOLY FUCKING SHIT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!
BEST THING IVE EVER HEAAAAAAAARRRRRRRDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
i must now worship you 12 times per day while this is playing
i will listen to this in the car, in school, at lunch, walking, running, sleeping, breathing, eating, pooping, peeing, taking a shower, going to the mall, reading, listening to other songs, and having sex

cjhgb4 responds:

do not worship me my friend, give the glory to god.

...

its easy to tell that there was little time put into this song
pretty bland

haywirehaywire responds:

wow alright another very helpfull review from somebody who hates getting bad reviews. great.

Check out more of my music on my sites:] -Fayde

Fayde @PoyzenJam

Age 31, Male

Milwaukee, WI

Joined on 5/31/09

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