PoyzenJam's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[HW - Prototype (VG)]

oh i see...

i know exactly whats wrong with this

it would be good

if it wasnt so bad

(helpful review)

-Fayde

haywirehaywire responds:

wow.

[HW - Mountain Top]

hey bitch

this sucks
jk
but seriously
jus playin tho
but for real
jokingly,
but really....

your gay

ok but seriously
i have feedback

jk

no but i do.
at 1:39, you make it travel from one ear to the next really fast
make it more gradual, it actually was unpleasant when it jumped fast like that

also another suggestion

you should not be so homosexual

jk

but seriously

this isnt your best
but its tight
add scratches

that would put the icing on the cake

i feel like i forgot something...

OH

You enjoy men penetrating your asshole.

ps.
this sucks

10/10
5/5

(Helpful review)

-Fayde

haywirehaywire responds:

wow im surprised your not banned from reviewing yet

[Monk - Poetry In Neutral]

what up

dope
got this shit on my ipoddd
im really diggin the bell on the 2nd snare
good shit

-Fayde

MC-Q responds:

Fayde.! Its monk from the vent.! Haha. but thanks

[Training Wheels]

well...

There isnt really a prominent beat - which is prime factor in hip hop
the snare is very quiet.
you should make the whole beat louder
add a snare thats louder, and more prominent in the beat
some hi hats woul dbe nice to
as for the melody, its extrememly simple, which is ok, but you may want to change it up more now and then
your on the right path though
-Fayde

ccc75 responds:

Thanks for the constructive feedback and specific feedback! That is just what I was looking for. I'll be sure to incorporate your suggestions in the longer version.

[HW - Haywyre 100]

MARTIN VOGT (YOU)

HAS A SMALL PENIS.
AND LIKE MEN INSIDE OF HIS BUTTOX

PS
CONNOR PECK IS GAY.
PSS
JORDAN WISE IS THE SHIT
PSSS
CHARLIE DIXON IS A CRACKHEAD
oh yeah, good song btw
your lucky you got someone to supply your samples
at 240 it gets intense
remiinds me of an epic duel
i like the piano
PSSSS
i heard your straight
JUST KIDDING
-Fayde

haywirehaywire responds:

wow
probably one of the greatest reviews ive had in a while

[HW - The Crimson Touch]

GAYYYYY

just like you
-Fayde

haywirehaywire responds:

lol.

[.Split Grim Ft MPZ]

nice

a kinda fast beat, but you kill this shit regardless
not really a fan of the singing though...
sick lines
-Fayde

Murdaa responds:

yeah, but i loved the feel so i had to kill it ;D tryna look for a nice singerr

[.Unordinary Poet]

dope

your flow is ill
i got this shit on my ipod
your voice matches beat real well
wish it was longer tho..
good job tho
-Fayde

Murdaa responds:

yeahhh, its a skit on my up comming mixtape.. i was really goin for a nice flow but i didnt want to over do it ;D

[HW-House Of Lords Album Teaser]

too short

like your penis is.
ps.
this is tight.
ps.
take out the liquid noises. they make the listener have to use the bathroom really bad.
ps. those scratch samples are sickkkkkkkkkkkkk
ps. you enjoy double penetration from 2 black males.
-Fayde

haywirehaywire responds:

wow what a review..
thanks

[HW - The Celts (non-album)]

ohh

this is my first time hearin this martin.
dope.
oh i was wondering
uhm
why is your penis small?
also.
why do you enjoy penis in your butthole?
ps.
why do you enjoy penis in your mouth?
5/5 10/10
fav.
-Fayde

haywirehaywire responds:

hah thanks.