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nice...

pretty simple...
pretty chill and relaxing...
the drums fit nicely with the melody. the only thing i would say is that the bass drum could have a tad more punch
really happy sounding song... i can picture this in like mario sunshine or something when your walking around exploring the island haha. thats what it reminds me of idk why.
good job
-Fayde

maer808 responds:

thanks for the review man

damn....

why are you improving so much?

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

Cuz I just feel like, 2010 is gonna be my year

im with Flared24

this also made me cum

freddyfinger responds:

ive made a lot of dirty laundry fuck
thx dude

deep

this shits got meaning and soul to it, which makes it stand out from the rest.
i suggest messing around with adding an extra word on some lines that rhyme. for example if you end a line with a rhyme, have the rhyming word a 2nd time in the background to accentuate the rhyme more. i hope you know what im sayin. its in alot of rap songs.
good job dude

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

yeah, I do know what your saying, I'm usually just way too stoned and lazy to do adlibs lol. i will on deserted tho, In progress, should be ripd by wednesday

<8)

i kan haz sp00ning?

thanks for the beat battle mention too

this track would be perfect if it had someone ill to rap on it.

freddyfinger responds:

u kan haz sp00n thx
and np

guess what

this is a spooner

freddyfinger responds:

spooon of lovvinn thx

wow

reminds me of krunkkillazkrew

so....

amazing.

cjhgb4 responds:

glad to be compared to an icon and personal hero

holy fucking....

i wanna lick lick lick you like a lolly pop

cjhgb4 responds:

get in line bro

HOLY SHIT

YOU ARE A MUSIKAL GENIUS!!!!!!!!! WHO would EVER think to do this??? im gona review all your music. hey, ever heard of krunkkillazkrew? i bet youd like them. pretty amazing.
ps. uhm sorry but that eminem greatest hits cd broke... i must have sat on it while we were watching 8 mile

cjhgb4 responds:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

heh.. regin shtim sineep

lol @ the bass drum

youd be so much better with fl9

kingtaco16 responds:

I know that

Check out more of my music on my sites:] -Fayde

Fayde @PoyzenJam

Age 32, Male

Milwaukee, WI

Joined on 5/31/09

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