PoyzenJam's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shogun Braker!!!!]

dang

really tight
more drum change ups would be nice
more ambient noises/effects
pretty awesome though

Druids-Warcry responds:

its my demo, im finished it soon, but your input is wonderful for the final product

[[ f ] Friends]

damn

those drums are raw as hell
good job with the samples as well

flashmac responds:

Thanks a lot brotha

[HW - Symmetry and Beyond]

uhhhh

gay

haywirehaywire responds:

you

[HW - Funky Groove]

im right

what did i tell you?
i told you about the paino and you didnt believe me
and everyone agrees.
you gotta believe me more lol
your not always right martaardddd
u poopface

haywirehaywire responds:

i wanted it this way

[Saga of the Fallen Warrior]

yo..

sick
your flows ill on this one dude
thanks for rappin over our beat
i really like the first line, it packs a punch and fits really well
really good job
-Fayde

BAF responds:

Yeah man, good job on the beat, subtle and emotional good for storytelling. Glad you liked it.

[What we do it for]

sup man

pretty tight
i see what your going for with this one
your lyrics are pretty good, although i would suggest that the flow could use a lil bit of work, there are some minor pauses, and some lines seems a little streatched
you got potential so just keep workin on gettin your flow smoother.
good job dude
-Fayde (PJ)

BAF responds:

Yeah man...working on that flow...tough to get that shit just right without taking a lot of time. Glad you liked it though and thanks for the review.

["cant we just be friends"]

not bad

i dont really want to be your friend but
the samples kinda tight
there are way too many vocals in my opinion
the beat should be louder, or just turn down vocals
there also isnt an ending, it just abruptly stops
and just so you know, im voting on this now for the first time, so how do you think it got to 1.2 before i even looked at it?
so obviously your wrong when you PM complaining that im the reason for peoples low scores lol....
by the way i gave this a 4/5
-Fayde

kanvas responds:

............

[BATTLE ME "dont try to hide"]

so...

are we at the carnival?

cuz this is like the music id hear.

and my NG name is PoyzenJam not JamPoyzen... therefore its PJ not JP... redo the track. lol...

otherwise i suppose your raps are decent, but the chorus is lame

and why are you trying to battle people that dont even rap?

i must have gotten under your skin that you had to make a fuckin song about me, my boy haywyre and omega phantom....

im favoriting this though, it made me laugh, i wanna listen to this later

-Fayde

kanvas responds:

RIGHTEOUS MAN! AT LEAST YOUR HONEST.

[Plum Faced Apple]

ello charles

the snare sounds hollow
put some meat behind that shittt

kingtaco16 responds:

martard was saying i use the same drum seet so i think i put some phaser or something really wierd on it

["chains Of Creativity"]

LOL

hopefully this is a joke song

because im LOLing the whole way through

Fayde

kanvas responds:

yeah dude..... LOLING!!! YOU FUCKIN DORK