PoyzenJam's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Anvilslam groove]

needs more variety

it needs more of a melody, other than just the 2 notes playing throughout the song...
the drums could be louder and more prominent too

LuigiSounds responds:

Yes, i am very aware of that.
This beat was just made for rhyming on, so i decided to keep it pretty simple and monotone :)
Thanks for the 7 though.

[(KKK) Jam Sesh]

WOW

YOU GUYS are insane!!!!
HOW DO YOU JAM LIKE THISSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????
please teach me

krunkkillazkrew responds:

i KNO WEE IZ

[Stairway to Heaven (Remix!)]

WTF

HOLY FUCKING SHIT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!
BEST THING IVE EVER HEAAAAAAAARRRRRRRDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
i must now worship you 12 times per day while this is playing
i will listen to this in the car, in school, at lunch, walking, running, sleeping, breathing, eating, pooping, peeing, taking a shower, going to the mall, reading, listening to other songs, and having sex

cjhgb4 responds:

do not worship me my friend, give the glory to god.

[HW - Day 1 Beat 1]

...

its easy to tell that there was little time put into this song
pretty bland

haywirehaywire responds:

wow alright another very helpfull review from somebody who hates getting bad reviews. great.

[(E7)EmCee Cthulhu]

good choice of song

you should get a better mic ...
sounds like your trying to rap over a PA system
the volume levels are all off too

GloineFiodh responds:

workin on it

[HW - Clubbing]

wow

whoever made the piano part must have a small chode and must be extremely ugly
oh wait... thats charlie
yo this is gay

haywirehaywire responds:

i love your review its so helpfull i will now mark if helpfull

[GSG - EmptyStreet OilyPud]

whadup

i really like the beat, very chil. the repeating crashes seem to be a bit loud. the vocals are a great touch to this piece, good job there... i like the whole progression too, although im a bit iffy on the 1 minute intro. strings are raw
Fayde

GunstarGreene responds:

Thanks for the review.

[Rainy Daze (sampled)]

the guitar is cool

would be a lot better with a better beat
and a louder one, more prominent
right now it just kinda sounds like sporadic noises
a beat that flowed smoother and doesnt sound so choppy should do the trick

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

Well I ended up playin wit tha song and fucked it all up, lmao. Thanx for the review, I eventually just erased this from my hard drive cuz after a while it just sounds like hell to me, lol. I think i'ma take about an hour each day and practice my drum compostitions.

[Absolute Lack of Enthusiasm]

hey

the beat is cool
but there is just way too much going on in the song
try to keep it more simple

Methreee responds:

haha for sure. thanks for checkin

[Underground ABCs]

cool

this beat needs another higher melody on it.
tht would make it so much better
the vocals in the begginning and at the end need to be turned up a tad
good job dude
a longer version would be nice too
with more change ups and such, like the one at 55, where the main melody is taken out
Fayde

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

this is a beat by shaggyhaired, I got up this morning and was diggin on it after finishin my concept. More of an exebition of the concept of rapping that is explained in the main comment. thanks for the review.