PoyzenJam's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[I Told Another Lie...]

LOL

this is what i call emo hip hop

haterrrrr

kanvas responds:

EXACTLY WHAT YOUR MISSING MY MAN EMOTION......THANX MAN.....

[(E7)Rap Experiments]

well

some more intensity would be nice
it sounds like your just talking
good beat choice to rap over
but you should credit gangstarr in your author comments
i mean, i like chill rapping
but this is almost boring
act like your into it
keep at it
Fayde

GloineFiodh responds:

be more specific theres 3 verses.

[It was all a Dream!]

so..

there are alot of gun noises in this song... it gets really abnoxious
there isnt much of a melody, just background notes
i didnt notice any drum change ups
or any change ups for that matter

janiev responds:

I know there isn't much of a melody and thats what i do wanted.. It is a rap beat without the rap..
And i can change the drums a little.. And i can look at the gun sounds..

[FF | Chipotle Theory]

hmm

heya freddy
damn this is jazzy
i didnt like the clap at first, but then it got to 51 seconds, and it fits really well in that melody
i like how you add wahs to your songs
is that a reason thing, sampled like that, or is it some frequency setting i dont know about?
i like it dude this is a jam
Fayde

freddyfinger responds:

thanks, yeah i adjusted the filter frequency & resolution to give it that wah sound

[Feel the (lonely) Beat]

okay

there arent any drums...
sounds like you are using FL presets too, cant tell for sure

ccc75 responds:

I made this in GarageBand. (No FL effects)

[Victory and Defeat]

hey

i think you got off to a bit of a slow start but once the song progressed your flow was solid
the singing was funny, it made me laugh
i dont like how you sped up the rapping tho, after singing, and then you were rapping quiter.
i say either rap 2x as fast as the tempo for the whole song, or AT the tempo for the whole song, prolly not both
i think like 25 sec to the first singing was the best rapping for sure, your flow got really good there
on the line "whats the definition of a sin" and after you really got into the spirit
but overall good job dude
i understand this is a hard piece to rap over
i hope you rap over more of me and haywyres stuff in the future
thank you!
Fayde

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

I sang just for you, lol. Honestly, I sang because you ragged my singin B4 so I figured I try to make it sound like sum cheezy 50's singer =) The transition was necessary because I wanted to have 2 full verses, and also thought it would be a fun challenge to write with 2 tempo's. All good and fun, I'll definetly be on em, thanks for the review

[A Tribute 2 The Tribute]

damn

dude...
this is raw
your gettin good

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

Ah yes thank you sir

[(KKK)LondonNegrosGettinKrunk]

god

stop
no one thinks this is funny

krunkkillazkrew responds:

N***A............

[(KKK) Twinko Lil' Gay Star]

wtf...

you guys ruin hip hop

krunkkillazkrew responds:

Yo MoTHer Iz mA hOE

[FF | The Phuket Quartet]

hello again and f*ck you

*facepalm*
can i just like...
watch you make a song
i would learn alot (except prolly not cuz you use reason)
i dont even wanna collab or anything
im not worthy
im actually bowing as im typing this
lol jk
but seriously ...

the guitar is sick
i dont really like the pads tho at 0:37 - they are ok, but i know you can do better
vocals once again are on point
same with sax
those wah - souding things are kinda cool, also kinda loud
i really like how you picked a more messy snare for this one, as opposed to what you usually choose as a crisp clack
diggin those tambourines

not one of your best
(so its only incredible, not godly)

Fayde

freddyfinger responds:

lol thanks man, your latest song open mind is really fuckin nice